lunes, 17 de septiembre de 2007

Fast Food, A great Concern for Many!

Look at the introduction

1. What’s the general statement?

The author wants to show a point of view about the criticize of what today represents the quick food for our society, she writes the advantages and disadvantages of this food

2. What’s the thesis statement?

The thesis of her is used is by a reflection for the young people with the quick food, ´cause she writes that is incredible how they think in this way, she outlines the advantages and disadvantages of this food

Look the body

1. What’s the topic sentence of the second paragraph?

She writes in the second and third paragraph about the positive and negative sine of the quick food

2. What’s the support of this argument?

she support this idea being based on real examples, ´cause she writes that when you eat a quick food maybe the people can do time extra for doing extra´s activities, for example using these hour extras to working and for this way win money.

3. What’s the topic sentence of third paragraph?

she also writes the the consequences of this food for the youths, ´cause they think that if they eat up they put on weight and for that reason it is that there is a high index of anorexy overalls in Colombia.

4. What’s the support of this argument?

examples of the real life, as the anorexy

Look at the Conclusion

Her conclusion is very specifies because she makes a good closing to the topic outlining a solution to this.

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Claudia Acero dijo...

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